This whole story is just tremendous and lovely and I was SO excited to see this last chapter show up tonight. You wrote them both so perfectly -- their actions and reactions, Uryuu's thoughts, all the wonderful things Chad said. And both of them are so in character, too! Yes, of course teenage Uryu would pull his pants back on and go brush his teeth afterward, bless his heart. Your descriptions of the sex and reactions are so steamy and perfect, and you can hear Uryuu sort of analyzing things with his brain, like "oh right, this has to be pheremones" but not fighting it and being overwhelmed. And Chad... your Chad is just sex on a stick, that's all there is to it. Whew!
Personally, I would love it if you continued in this 'verse whenever you wanted to do a one-shot. I would be deliriously happy to watch their continued interactions and explorations. LOL, there's so much I can imagine them doing and would love to see. (I'm totally stuck on the idea of the two of them trying to find the perfect lube and amassing an embarrassingly large collection of 'rejects' that Ichigo stumbles upon one day while looking for a bandaid or something.)
Every chapter of this story has been delightful, but this one... well, I had high expectations, and they were thoroughly met. Definitely one of the best, most believable, and out-and-out hot "first time" fic I've ever had the pleasure to read. *loves on the fic*
And yes, any time you want to write more in this 'verse, I will happily devour it. There is WAYYY too little fic of these two out there (I know, I've looked) and that needs to change.
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Date: 2011-02-13 12:49 am (UTC)This whole story is just tremendous and lovely and I was SO excited to see this last chapter show up tonight. You wrote them both so perfectly -- their actions and reactions, Uryuu's thoughts, all the wonderful things Chad said. And both of them are so in character, too! Yes, of course teenage Uryu would pull his pants back on and go brush his teeth afterward, bless his heart. Your descriptions of the sex and reactions are so steamy and perfect, and you can hear Uryuu sort of analyzing things with his brain, like "oh right, this has to be pheremones" but not fighting it and being overwhelmed. And Chad... your Chad is just sex on a stick, that's all there is to it. Whew!
Personally, I would love it if you continued in this 'verse whenever you wanted to do a one-shot. I would be deliriously happy to watch their continued interactions and explorations. LOL, there's so much I can imagine them doing and would love to see. (I'm totally stuck on the idea of the two of them trying to find the perfect lube and amassing an embarrassingly large collection of 'rejects' that Ichigo stumbles upon one day while looking for a bandaid or something.)
Every chapter of this story has been delightful, but this one... well, I had high expectations, and they were thoroughly met. Definitely one of the best, most believable, and out-and-out hot "first time" fic I've ever had the pleasure to read. *loves on the fic*
And yes, any time you want to write more in this 'verse, I will happily devour it. There is WAYYY too little fic of these two out there (I know, I've looked) and that needs to change.
Thank you so much for writing this!